Last updated on December 5th, 2019 at 08:57 pm
If you are starting on your public speaking dream, I want you to understand something about speech writing and how you can be a bad public speaker without realizing it–
If there’s no character and no conflict, then there’s no story presentation, and no one will remember you or your speech.
Read that sentence again.
Read it one more time.
In my career of being a top motivational speaker, coaching new public speakers and people in business how to present a story as a tool of impact, I see a common mistake.
Speakers present stories that aren’t really stories.
• A list of facts is not a story presentation.
• Telling me how you got started in business is not a story or an interesting presentation.
• Telling me the history of your organization does not make a story presentation.
Those are the facts.
Every speech story must present a character with conflict; a pain they want to get rid of, or a desire they want to achieve. It’s how you create connections and engagement with your audience and your potential customers.
If your speeches, your marketing materials, your website ‘About Me’ page, and business purpose doesn’t present a clear main character with a problem that gets solved, you don’t have a compelling story, and you won’t be a successful motivational speaker or successful in business.
Period.
That’s the end of today’s big dream lesson on how to avoid being bad at public speaking by presenting a better story.
Kelly Swanson
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Kelly Swanson is an award-winning storyteller, motivational speaker, published author and TV personality who is passionate about helping women harness the power of their stories to connect, influence, and get the results they dream of accomplishing. Laughing the whole way, Kelly teaches women how to master the art of connection through the power of strategic storytelling. You can find her on The Fashion Hero show airing Fall of 2017 on Amazon Prime or on her website MotivationalSpeakerKellySwanson.com.
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